Wow. For taking less than an hour, that's pretty darn good. I like the
"clock" effect in the background- everything just sort of comes
together and works.
Thorough analysis has revealed a stray pixel misalignment near the primary
scan's undergarment region. Further analysis suggests that this pixel will
attract far more attention than the other 1,310,719 well-placed pixels. As such,
leaving it there would be beneficial.
Seriously, good job. I'd just leave that pixel there, it's like free advertising
(lol)!
I shoulda seen this one coming (lol). If any Paris fashion designers see this
wall, you might start a trend
The good:
Ditto the above comments about composition, placing- quite well done.
Good job finishing the wing- I couldn't even tell it was halfway cut off until I
read the rest of the comment.
Nit-picks:
That wing's about to catch on fire- was that intentionally done?
The sleeves on the dress are overlaid over the wings- the wings should be
overlaid on top, and maybe the sleeves drawn tighter to her arms (something's got to be holding the dress on
someplace!)
It's hard to tell, but isn't the town in the background on fire? If so, some
thick black columns of smoke would be called for (and certainly complement the
title).
A good work overall, but I'd call it awesome if those changes were made.
That pose caught my eye even from the small thumbnail. I'd hate to cross-examine
that witness.
There's some very slight pixellation, but from being vectored from screenshots
originally, it doesn't look bad at all. This does well as a simplistic-style
wall. As far as improvements, it might help the sense of place more if you
filled in some of the empty space on the right- like maybe along the lines of a
microphone, pitcher of water, and such on the desk, and maybe on the far right
have a camera pointed at her? But I think it's a good concept.
I like this- it fits the mood of the show almost perfectly, like she's running
through the night with the crows, without a care in the world.
It has just the right amount of glitter, and just the right amount of
"mist" effect, without overpowering Misuzu there. And I personally
like the crows/black feathers thing, they contrast very well with the bright
wings & bright planet* and keep the wall from being too bright for a
desktop. Overall, a very calming and "balanced" wall. I'm faving it,
hope ya don't mind!
* (the size/lines on the sphere don't really resemble the moon, I'd just call it
a planet and be done with it )
Only improvement I can think of is maybe some more detail on the boots (buckles
or zippers or some such- maybe the boots themselves could be on fire?) But I
love the level of detail on this. Plus eyebrows on fire = win!
I see you fixed the hair and arm. Pretty good, pretty good!
The other thing I can think of is, you might want to crop off the parts on the
top, left, and bottom where the scanner shows around the paper, so it doesn't
take attention away from the drawing (make sure your program's set to save at
max. quality), then update the image.
I saw this from saikusa's page, lol. Definitely very easy on the eyes, and a
unique perspective- this works pretty well as a desktop background by itself!
I'm fav-ing it too.
I like the background on this, it has just a little bit of a "brush"
effect to give it a dreaming sensation.
The only thing that strikes me as odd about the scan is how Saber's eyebrows and
eyes go over her hair- her hair just sort of vanishes! It'd probably be a pain
to clean up, but it's really the only thing strange about the wall. Other than
that, I really like it overall.
One, the buildings. Since the moon's so bright, it should be reflecting some
light off of the buildings, so a little bit more silhouette-ing (sp?) of the
buildings would give a more realistic feel to the city, as well as some more
detailing of the roofs.
Two (and big one) the plane. (You did say plane, not glider- a glider wouldn't
be nosed up that steeply, or it'd lose all of its airspeed and be in big trouble
fast.) Basically, every powered aircraft in the world will have some sort of
running lights on, especially at night. So if you wanted to elaborate the plane
a little bit, you could put red lights on the top/bottom of the left wing, and
green on the bottom of the right wing, and a really bright white light on top of
the vertical stab, brighter than the moon, even. (anti-collision light) Also,
some flight controls sticking out would help it too. I'd be glad to send you
some pictures of aircraft- just PM me if you're interested.
Sorry if I'm too specific- I've just worked around aircraft for 6 years now
(lol) Found this someplace else and was going to upload it before I saw this, which is way higher quality anyway.
Aoi Nanase draws gorgeously. Thanks for sharing!
This was reported as a rip because your description is all jacked up- you might want to edit it.
Wow. Never seen the series, but I love the gothic feel of this.
Ooo, awesome one! Raises the hairs on the back of my neck. Spooky girl + spooky graveyard + magic wand = trouble.
Good find! All of those covers look nice actually- they make me want to look into the series a little bit.
I would suggest you crop out the usable part of the images though. They should still meet the 1000x1000 min size criteria.
Just stumbled across this one (lol). Good mesh job, I actually looked for the seam and couldn't find it. Nice work and thanks for sharing!
It's hard to not have a soft spot for her, looking like that.
Wow. For taking less than an hour, that's pretty darn good. I like the "clock" effect in the background- everything just sort of comes together and works.
BTW I want to say the scan is from Moldavite.
Thorough analysis has revealed a stray pixel misalignment near the primary scan's undergarment region. Further analysis suggests that this pixel will attract far more attention than the other 1,310,719 well-placed pixels. As such, leaving it there would be beneficial.
Seriously, good job. I'd just leave that pixel there, it's like free advertising (lol)!
I shoulda seen this one coming (lol). If any Paris fashion designers see this wall, you might start a trend
The good:
Ditto the above comments about composition, placing- quite well done.
Good job finishing the wing- I couldn't even tell it was halfway cut off until I read the rest of the comment.
Nit-picks:
That wing's about to catch on fire- was that intentionally done?
The sleeves on the dress are overlaid over the wings- the wings should be overlaid on top, and maybe the sleeves drawn tighter to her arms (something's got to be holding the dress on someplace!)
It's hard to tell, but isn't the town in the background on fire? If so, some thick black columns of smoke would be called for (and certainly complement the title).
A good work overall, but I'd call it awesome if those changes were made.
That pose caught my eye even from the small thumbnail. I'd hate to cross-examine that witness.
There's some very slight pixellation, but from being vectored from screenshots originally, it doesn't look bad at all. This does well as a simplistic-style wall. As far as improvements, it might help the sense of place more if you filled in some of the empty space on the right- like maybe along the lines of a microphone, pitcher of water, and such on the desk, and maybe on the far right have a camera pointed at her? But I think it's a good concept.
I like this- it fits the mood of the show almost perfectly, like she's running through the night with the crows, without a care in the world.
It has just the right amount of glitter, and just the right amount of "mist" effect, without overpowering Misuzu there. And I personally like the crows/black feathers thing, they contrast very well with the bright wings & bright planet* and keep the wall from being too bright for a desktop. Overall, a very calming and "balanced" wall. I'm faving it, hope ya don't mind!
* (the size/lines on the sphere don't really resemble the moon, I'd just call it a planet and be done with it
)
Only improvement I can think of is maybe some more detail on the boots (buckles or zippers or some such- maybe the boots themselves could be on fire?) But I love the level of detail on this. Plus eyebrows on fire = win!
Thanks for sharing- good find! I have a serious weakness for mikos.
Wow, she looks so sweet, even the birds like her
Very light and cheerful scene. Thanks for sharing!
Just when I forget why Carnelian's so popular, they remind me.
*stares for 2 or 3 minutes*
Wow, I hope somebody walls this! Good find!
It has a very calming effect. I'm surprised this hasn't gotten more attention. Thanks for sharing!
lol, I can't believe this hasen't gotten more attention.
Very calming and almost heart-breakingly adorable! She's about to lose that hat though!
I see you fixed the hair and arm. Pretty good, pretty good!
The other thing I can think of is, you might want to crop off the parts on the top, left, and bottom where the scanner shows around the paper, so it doesn't take attention away from the drawing (make sure your program's set to save at max. quality), then update the image.
Yet another reason why folks love walling Carnelian stuff. Good find!
I like this one! Sharp and colorful- good find.
I saw this from saikusa's page, lol. Definitely very easy on the eyes, and a unique perspective- this works pretty well as a desktop background by itself! I'm fav-ing it too.
"Serenity" - this reminds me of the Godsmack song for some reason.
I like the calming effect too- Saber looks like she's meditating. Plus the tilted room perspective gives a neat feel to it. I'm fav-ing this one.
The eyebrows still block out the hair though- do all Saber scans look like that? Just curious.
I like the background on this, it has just a little bit of a "brush" effect to give it a dreaming sensation.
The only thing that strikes me as odd about the scan is how Saber's eyebrows and eyes go over her hair- her hair just sort of vanishes! It'd probably be a pain to clean up, but it's really the only thing strange about the wall. Other than that, I really like it overall.
I have a couple of nit-picks about this:
One, the buildings. Since the moon's so bright, it should be reflecting some light off of the buildings, so a little bit more silhouette-ing (sp?) of the buildings would give a more realistic feel to the city, as well as some more detailing of the roofs.
Two (and big one) the plane. (You did say plane, not glider- a glider wouldn't be nosed up that steeply, or it'd lose all of its airspeed and be in big trouble fast.) Basically, every powered aircraft in the world will have some sort of running lights on, especially at night. So if you wanted to elaborate the plane a little bit, you could put red lights on the top/bottom of the left wing, and green on the bottom of the right wing, and a really bright white light on top of the vertical stab, brighter than the moon, even. (anti-collision light) Also, some flight controls sticking out would help it too. I'd be glad to send you some pictures of aircraft- just PM me if you're interested.
Sorry if I'm too specific- I've just worked around aircraft for 6 years now
BTW just for gee-whiz- the lyrics to the original song: http://www.lyricsdepot.com/harry-chapin/cats-in-the-cradle.html